Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×

:iconangelofmisery59: More from angelofmisery59


More from deviantART



Details

Submitted on
May 3, 2009
File Size
566 bytes
Thumb

Stats

Views
136
Favourites
6 (who?)
Comments
20
Downloads
6
×
Its night time.
The moon has hidden.
Throwing me into pure darkness,
how lovely.
It enshrouds the empty hole in my chest.
Leaving blood squirting out of my veins, into where my heart resided.
I gave you my heart
Who knew it would die when removed from my cold body.
You must hate me,
You must utterly despise me.
I'm betting you will want to stake my heart,
When you hear what i have to say.
hey i wrote something....and stuck in an inuendo (im not sure wat it would be considered i cant remember wats its called.)
" gave you my heart
Who knew it would die when removed from my cold body."
i gave her my heart (metaphorically) and my love for her died (the heart represents love) and the empty hole where my heart is represents how i feel heartless and yea...
why does it always end like this...
Add a Comment:
 
:iconwolfsthorn:
WolfsThorn Featured By Owner May 5, 2009
Mmmm, so true :D
Lovly poem, I can imagine it as if I was there :)
Reply
:iconangelofmisery59:
angelofmisery59 Featured By Owner May 5, 2009
thank you
Reply
:iconam3ra:
AM3RA Featured By Owner May 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
nice... it doesnt always have to end like this... maybe it wasnt truely love... it was just a crush...
Reply
:iconangelofmisery59:
angelofmisery59 Featured By Owner May 4, 2009
wether it was or not....i dont want to hurt her...
Reply
:iconam3ra:
AM3RA Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
i know..
Reply
:iconangelofmisery59:
angelofmisery59 Featured By Owner May 5, 2009
...
Reply
:iconiiixii:
IIIXII Featured By Owner May 4, 2009
This is sad. :(
Reply
:iconangelofmisery59:
angelofmisery59 Featured By Owner May 4, 2009
yes...did u like it tho? cud i do anything to improve it?
Reply
:iconpetit-chaton:
Petit-chaton Featured By Owner May 4, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
I love this.
why do you think you're heartless?
Reply
:iconangelofmisery59:
angelofmisery59 Featured By Owner May 4, 2009
thank you, long story nif u really want to know im me and ill tell u
Reply
Add a Comment: