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I lie and listen. fully awake,
In the the dead of night,
To my sorrow-full and self hating conscious.
Telling me.
Showing me.
I'm not the guy you think I am.
I am not great
Nor marvelous.
You can feel the cold of my skin,
It feels like ice.
like very cold tin.
My chest is hollow.
I am the Tin man, my chest is empty, i am heartless.
Open me up and see,
rather.
Open me up and not see.
My chest is empty,
my heart is gone.
I'm not the marvoulous guy you think I am.
I'm a man with a hollow chest.
You say our hearts beat as one,
but what you hear is just the echo of your heart.
I'm a cold heartless man of tin.
filled with guilt and a burdened conscious.
Hopefully things will return as they once were.
You may find your path again on the glimmering yellow road.
And ill remain  rusted stiff,
forgotten behind the trees.
Hopefully you can forgive me for the pain I have caused you...
Hopefully you can forget me so that the pain will go away...
well as you can probably tell my "poem" references the "Tin Man" in "The Wizard of Oz" idk why he was in my mind when i thought of this...
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:iconam3ra:
AM3RA Featured By Owner May 9, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
... i give up..
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:iconangelofmisery59:
angelofmisery59 Featured By Owner May 9, 2009
im sorry...
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:iconam3ra:
AM3RA Featured By Owner May 9, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
its fine..
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:iconangelofmisery59:
angelofmisery59 Featured By Owner May 9, 2009
no its not...
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:iconam3ra:
AM3RA Featured By Owner May 9, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
yes it is
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:iconangelofmisery59:
angelofmisery59 Featured By Owner May 9, 2009
k...
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AlwaysAnUnquietMind Featured By Owner May 9, 2009
we are all the tin man at one time... very well written with lots of emotion...
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angelofmisery59 Featured By Owner May 9, 2009
thank you very much and thanks for the fav
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AlwaysAnUnquietMind Featured By Owner May 9, 2009
you're welcome...
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angelofmisery59 Featured By Owner May 9, 2009
yep....
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TheKnell Featured By Owner May 7, 2009   Writer
Wow. Like this one alot. Nice imagery.
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angelofmisery59 Featured By Owner May 8, 2009
thank you, and thanks so much for the fav
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TheKnell Featured By Owner May 10, 2009   Writer
My pleasure.
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angelofmisery59 Featured By Owner May 10, 2009
:]
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kurenaix1234 Featured By Owner May 7, 2009  Student General Artist
Oo I like this :o
good job,it's a different style again I think,and I like it.

Btw,have you see Tin Man? on the sifi channel. I'm a nerd and watch those tv movies haha
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angelofmisery59 Featured By Owner May 7, 2009
thank you very much btw, sorry i thot i had said that on the other msg but guess not, thanks again homes :D
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kurenaix1234 Featured By Owner May 8, 2009  Student General Artist
FO SHO :D
hehe
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angelofmisery59 Featured By Owner May 8, 2009
hehe XD
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angelofmisery59 Featured By Owner May 7, 2009
haha no, why?
i got the title from the song "Iron Man"By black sabbath while thinking of the Wizard of Oz so yea
is the movie any good?
and dont worry i watch the sifi channel too
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kurenaix1234 Featured By Owner May 8, 2009  Student General Artist
Hehe I see :D
Mm it's a pretty good sifi movie
zoey dechannel is in it
or however you spell her name
she was in the happening and the yes man I believe
anddd a hitch hikers guide to the galaxy
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angelofmisery59 Featured By Owner May 8, 2009
yep
and kool
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BBKatsu1 Featured By Owner May 7, 2009
good like analogy of the tin man..
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:iconangelofmisery59:
angelofmisery59 Featured By Owner May 7, 2009
thanks very much
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BBKatsu1 Featured By Owner May 10, 2009
your welcome =)
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baf39 Featured By Owner May 7, 2009
amazing
full of strong feelings
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angelofmisery59 Featured By Owner May 7, 2009
thank you very much
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Petit-chaton Featured By Owner May 7, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
sad, but wonderful.
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angelofmisery59 Featured By Owner May 7, 2009
thank you and thanks for the fav
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Petit-chaton Featured By Owner May 7, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
you're welcome :]
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